From e71ca1fba3ce1b412a89070e001f6afb0fe23a69 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Noah Petherbridge <root@kirsle.net>
Date: Mon, 27 May 2024 12:44:30 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Update wording re: secondary photo ID verification

---
 .../email/certification_secondary.html          |  3 ++-
 web/templates/photo/certification.html          | 17 +++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/web/templates/email/certification_secondary.html b/web/templates/email/certification_secondary.html
index 146a6d1..c605d75 100644
--- a/web/templates/email/certification_secondary.html
+++ b/web/templates/email/certification_secondary.html
@@ -15,7 +15,8 @@
         <p>
         To get your certification photo approved, you will need to upload a copy of an
         official photo ID that shows your <strong>face</strong> and your <strong>date of birth</strong>.
-        All other information on your ID should be blacked out before sharing it.
+        All other information on your ID should be blacked out before sending it, to protect your
+        privacy and security.
         </p>
 
         <p>
diff --git a/web/templates/photo/certification.html b/web/templates/photo/certification.html
index 5b41286..06cb8d1 100644
--- a/web/templates/photo/certification.html
+++ b/web/templates/photo/certification.html
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
                             {{else if eq .CertificationPhoto.Status "approved"}}
                                 <span class="tag is-success">Approved</span>
                             {{else if eq .CertificationPhoto.Status "secondary"}}
-                                <span class="tag is-info">Secondary ID Requested</span>
+                                <span class="tag is-info">Photo ID Requested</span>
                             {{else if eq .CertificationPhoto.Status "rejected"}}
                                 <span class="tag is-danger">Rejected</span>
                             {{else}}
@@ -45,14 +45,14 @@
                         <div class="notification is-info is-light content">
                             <p>
                                 A {{PrettyTitle}} admin has reviewed your certification photo and has requested
-                                that you show a secondary form of photo ID to verify your age.
+                                that you provide a secondary form of photo ID to verify your age.
                             </p>
 
                             <p>
                                 Please upload a scan or photo of an official, government issued ID which shows
                                 a photo of your face and your date of birth. <strong>Please black out any other
                                 personal information from your ID.</strong> We do not want your name, address,
-                                ID number, or any sensitive information - <em>just</em> your <strong>photo</strong>
+                                ID number, or any sensitive information - <em>only</em> your <strong>photo</strong>
                                 and your <strong>date of birth</strong>.
                             </p>
 
@@ -132,14 +132,15 @@
                         {{else if .CertificationPhoto.SecondaryVerified}}
                         <div class="notification is-success is-light content">
                             <p>
-                                Your <i class="fa fa-id-card"></i> <strong>secondary form of photo ID</strong> has
-                                been reviewed and approved by an administrator. We have removed the image itself
-                                from the server.
+                                Congratulations!
+                                Your <i class="fa fa-id-card"></i> <strong>age verification photo</strong> has
+                                been reviewed and approved. This photo has now been deleted from our system to
+                                protect your privacy and security.
                             </p>
 
                             <p>
-                                Note: if you delete your Certification Photo at this point, or upload a new one,
-                                you will be requested to re-upload your photo ID again as well.
+                                Note: please do not delete or change your original Certification Photo, or else
+                                you will be required to re-upload your age verification photo ID again.
                             </p>
                         </div>
                         {{end}}